英语
写作
高一
复习 8 次
添加于 2026-07-18
难度:
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题目内容
原题
请根据以下情境写一篇短文:你的好朋友李明沉迷网络游戏,影响了学习。作为班长,你需要在班会上发言,劝说李明并提出建议。词数:100词左右。
我的答案
Dear Li Ming, I am worried about you...
正确答案
参考答案:
Dear Li Ming,
I want to talk to you honestly about your recent situation. I've noticed you spend hours playing online games every day, which has greatly affected your schoolwork. I understand games are fun, but nothing is more important than your health and future.
Here are my suggestions: First, set a time limit for gaming, such as one hour on weekends only. Second, try outdoor activities like basketball or running, which are both healthy and enjoyable. Finally, make a study plan and ask teachers for help when needed.
You are talented and full of potential. I believe you can balance games and studies. Come on!
Yours,
Class Monitor
错题分析
解析
劝说文写作要点:
- 共情开头:I want to talk to you honestly(尊重对方)
- 指出问题:沉迷游戏影响学业(事实描述)
- 提出建议:限时游戏、户外活动、制定学习计划(具体可行)
- 正向激励:You are talented(给予信心)
易错点:语气过于强硬或过于委婉;建议不具体;结构混乱。
学习提示
- 建议每隔1天、3天、7天、14天、30天复习一次
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