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原题
阅读以下短文开头：Tom had always dreamed of becoming a scientist. One summer morning, he discovered a strange stone in his grandmother's garden that glowed with a soft blue light... 请续写一个故事，词数150左右。
Tom picked up the stone carefully. To his amazement, it was warm to the touch. The moment he held it, strange images flashed through his mind — a hidden laboratory, an ancient map, and a scientist whose face he could not recognize.
Driven by curiosity, Tom took the stone to school. His science teacher, Mrs. Li, immediately recognized it as a piece of meteorite from a forgotten meteor shower. "This is extraordinary," she said excitedly. "It contains elements we have never seen before."
That night, Tom placed the stone on his desk. Suddenly, a soft voice echoed in his room: "Tom, I have been waiting for you..."
错题分析
解析
读后续写评分标准：
- 与原文衔接：承接"奇怪石头发出蓝光"的设定，描写 Tom 捡起石头
- 情节发展：石头发热、脑中闪过幻象、找老师求证、当晚出现声音（层层递进）
- 语言质量：使用 To his amazement、Driven by curiosity 等高级表达
- 字数控制：150词左右，详略得当
易错点：情节脱离原文设定；语言过于简单或语法错误多；字数严重不足。
学习提示
- 建议每隔1天、3天、7天、14天、30天复习一次
- 复习时先自己重新做一遍，再看正确答案
- 确保真正理解解题思路，而不仅仅是记住答案
- 相关知识点也可以一起复习巩固
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